I think it came together very well. Nice job, Juese.
My only suggestions were some music in certain places under the interviews and scenes, in order to evoke the mood you are going for.
Also, some transitions between chapters felt a little weird, but since it's being released in segments on the web, it might not be an issue.
Otherwise, I laughed through the whole damn thing. It was a depressing yet fun trip down memory lane, and Juese managed to cram 4-5 years of our lives into this doc. Ending was phenomenal. Can't wait to watch it on big screen with speakers again.
"It is." -Juese